英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作技巧：平行結(jié)構(gòu)（3）
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英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作技巧：平行結(jié)構(gòu)（3）
(并列過(guò)去完成時(shí))
No: Jane is pretty, with brown hair, and has a graceful manner.
Yes: Jane is pretty, brown-haired, and graceful.
(形容詞平行結(jié)構(gòu))
No: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and because his health deteriorated rapidly.
Yes: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and his rapidly failing health.
(作賓語(yǔ)的名詞平行結(jié)構(gòu))
No: They bought the house for location and affordability.
Yes: They bought the house because of its location and its affordability.
(并列名詞;注意代詞的所有格)
No: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and as if he was unimportant?
Yes: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and unimportant?
(形容詞的平行結(jié)構(gòu))
No: This could be a problem for both the winners and for those who lose.
Yes: This could be a problem for both the winners and losers.
